MakMil

some artist

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Need a lot of fighters for the crusade

$55.76 of $1 453 raised

Donation to the treasury for the benefit of the order

Mar 31 2023 17:49

A little message about the text)

If you have any thoughts on the test and how to improve it, I'd love to read them) my English is wobbly and I have no experience in writing dialogues. so any criticism is welcome)

I would also like to sometimes add old words in English to their lexicon. If you know any relevant words, also suggest)

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Jack Seyfert

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Apr 03 2023 15:40

MakMil

I wonder if I'll try to work through it, thanks)

Apr 03 2023 23:51

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almost finished 30 and 31 pages

Apr 03 2023 12:49

Thank you "sacredpeak18", he showed a couple of flaws in the text)

Mar 31 2023 17:46

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Knight

$2.91 per month

To all Knighted,

the Master of the Order undertakes to fulfill:

►To give the opportunity to contemplate the canvas

earlier than the commoners

►Allow you to see sketches

and capture the process of creating art

►Show Honor and Respect

Paladin

$5.9 per month

To all holders of the title of Paladin, the Master of the Order pledges himself to fulfill:

► all that is required for an ordinary Knight

► access to special scrolls, the images in which are able to move as if alive, before the others

► several times a month a council will meet to decide which image will be subject to the magic "animation" of the next

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