Практика выходного дня - Parks
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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others believe housing facilities should be built instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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1. Читаете статьи:
Improving the Social Sustainability of High-riseshttps://urbanland.uli.org/public-spaces/from-vacant-properties-to-green-space
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Пример моего эссе ниже:
Vegetation is an essential component of any ecosystem. Therefore, there are those who consider that every free area in cities should be used for creating green zones, while others prioritize building accommodation facilities instead. I partially agree with both views. In my opinion, to address
both ever-increasing demand for homes and public green spots, available
land in cities should be used in a new format that is both space-efficient and environmentally sustainable.
both ever-increasing demand for homes and public green spots, available
land in cities should be used in a new format that is both space-efficient and environmentally sustainable.
Even though I agree that public parks are important for the community’s well-being, their space-efficiency in settings of today’s densely populated cities is highly questionable. Undoubtedly, green spaces bring a lot of environmental benefits by mitigating pollutants. As such, parks are wildlife sanctuaries that are definitely worth taking up
vacant urban areas. However, such publicly accessible green spots are
extremely space-intensive facilities that require sufficient area which
can be otherwise used for more pressing needs. For example, a square
meter of land in densely-populated cities, for example, can either
accommodate hundreds of dwellers living in a high-rise or just a few
trees which are not likely to significantly contribute to the
improvement of air quality.
vacant urban areas. However, such publicly accessible green spots are
extremely space-intensive facilities that require sufficient area which
can be otherwise used for more pressing needs. For example, a square
meter of land in densely-populated cities, for example, can either
accommodate hundreds of dwellers living in a high-rise or just a few
trees which are not likely to significantly contribute to the
improvement of air quality.
A viable alternative to traditional massive parks that satisfies both
views can be vertical green neighborhood communities that can make
cities a viable and sustainable habitat. To avoid urban sprawl and
create a green environment, housing should be transferred into the
compact format of high-rises that uses every opportunity to incorporate
green areas into the urban milieu. For instance, vertical greening
systems along with roof gardens may help to make effective use of
otherwise unexploited building surfaces, which can comprise up to 10
square kilometers per a 100-story construction. Therefore, it is
essential to prioritize such constructions when considering the use of
vacant spaces in cities.
views can be vertical green neighborhood communities that can make
cities a viable and sustainable habitat. To avoid urban sprawl and
create a green environment, housing should be transferred into the
compact format of high-rises that uses every opportunity to incorporate
green areas into the urban milieu. For instance, vertical greening
systems along with roof gardens may help to make effective use of
otherwise unexploited building surfaces, which can comprise up to 10
square kilometers per a 100-story construction. Therefore, it is
essential to prioritize such constructions when considering the use of
vacant spaces in cities.
In conclusion, I partially agree with both prioritising parks and
accommodation. Traditional spacious parks are losing their relevance in
today’s highly populated cities, which aim at making maximum use of
limited urban space. In such conditions, it is a sustainable
architecture that can address not only the constantly growing demand for
accommodation, but also the need for a habitable urban environment.
accommodation. Traditional spacious parks are losing their relevance in
today’s highly populated cities, which aim at making maximum use of
limited urban space. In such conditions, it is a sustainable
architecture that can address not only the constantly growing demand for
accommodation, but also the need for a habitable urban environment.
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практика выходного дня
Some believe that towns and cities need to build more housing facilities in free city spaces because a lot of cities and towns are now densely populated and more and more are moving to cities, thus a lot of people need places to live.
Others consider that green areas are highly important in cities and towns and I side with this opinion because green areas in cities and towns not only create recreational zones for people, but also act as stress relievers and reduce people’s anxiety.